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This is a one-shot of a scene that could have happened in The Great Mouse Detective film. It is supposed to take place during Ratigan's song, "The World's Greatest Criminal Mind" and before the scene cuts back to Basil's flat. The writing was inspired from Concept Art by Vance Gerry and with the help of *Mlle-Relda's Dating the Disney Film. I also drew my own style from Gerry's art and called it A Quiet Discussion, or the picture you see above the text.

Thank you for viewing and comments are greatly welcomed.

The Great Mouse Detective and its characters is © Eve Titus/Disney
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PrayerGirl1 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
Danm! That was very good! You have a talent for writting! I loved it! :D
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Brinatello Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
Thank you very much! I like to add scenes here and there that might have happened in the film. :nod:
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PrayerGirl1 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
Weather or not it did or it didn't it was Awsomely Amazing! And I wouldn't be opposed to more. Btw you wrote it like Disney would have. It sounded and felt athentic. If you can read the last word there. Btww i can't spell. :D'
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Brinatello Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
Aww, you're so sweet! I appreciate your kind words! :aww: I often consider myself better at drawing compared to writing, but sometimes, if I give a story a lot of attention with the sentence structure, grammar, spelling, etc. it usually comes out to my liking. :)
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PrayerGirl1 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
You're welcome and Thanks and it seriously cae out to my liking! ^o^
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Mitsuka Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009
Beautifully done! Nice work! :heart: :+fav:
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Brinatello Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
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MouseAvenger Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awww, that was such a cute & adorable story! :D Great work! :clap:
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Brinatello Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
Thank you! :) I can't stand my own writing sometimes and I prayed it would get positive results. :pray: I would like to show it at ff.net for a wider audience but the Document manager isn't working at the moment. :doh:
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MouseAvenger Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oh, no worries, I'm sure it'll be back on its feet by tonight or tomorrow. :)
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